It's alright. It seems like it needs a little something, you know? I liked the start but it just didn't go far. I think if you added an extra minute to this and added a different direction to it, it would be a lot better. Good luck, I like where this is going.
Thanks, man. I appreciate you giving me feedback. I'm just kinda posting things as I learn how to do more things with flstudios.
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